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Old 01-14-2010, 03:56 PM
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Default Personification Poem.

We played hop scotch, on flaming rocks
As angry skies say hi,
The red liquid snakes by,

Roaring, shaking, catastrophe
We run for our lives
As the red streams slithered by.

I had to write this for my English class. I was really confused on what to write about because I never written a Personification poem before. D:
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Old 01-14-2010, 04:16 PM
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I like this poem. It's kind of like a riddle, trying to figure out what it is. I couldn't get it until you told me, but it made sense after that. i love those kinds of poems. Great job. <3
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I like this poem. It's kind of like a riddle, trying to figure out what it is. I couldn't get it until you told me, but it made sense after that. i love those kinds of poems. Great job. <3
Thanks. Now I don't feel so bad about tomorrow when he has to read my poem in class. XD
Makes me feel better. XDD :3
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